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2010. 7. 11. 11:10
Hello, everyone. My name is ...
Before I begin, let me ask two questions to you.
How many you guys do social network?
How many do you have twitter? How about blog? Then how about cyworld?
Yes, most of you have social network.
Then how many do you guys fall in love with somebody?
Nobody? It's tragedy.
The subject of my presentation is about the relation between twitter and feeling love, genersity.
The neuroeconomist Zak is the doctor of oxytosin. He research about the influence of oxytosin when we are doing something or when we feel something.
There are great correlation with oxytosin and our generosity.
When the person is inhaled by the oxytosin, he or she become more generous so they want to donate more money than others.
And if we feel sympathy, compassion or somekind of love, the oxytosin is growing on us.
Dr. Zak has done experiment with the person who is doing twitter with somebody, and we measure the amount of oxytosin in his body. The experimentee tweet with others with the normal conversation with some humor and jokes. The result of that experiment is that the oxytosin is increased in his body. The amount of increasing is similar with that of the mother who is in the wedding march of daughter. It shows that we have experienced tweeter as if it is real relationship in the world.
The social network at the online makes us feel more generous and more sympathy and more feeling love with somebody. With this oxytosin our streess is being lessen.
The online social network make our life more lubricant, doesn't it?
However, I have two concern about this phenomenon.
The first one is about the dangerous of control of us by using oxytosin or online social network in our shopping.
The second one is the illusion of social networking in online, or the collapse of social network in online.
The article also indicate the dangerous of the using of oxytosin as perchasing more.
We always notice about this with social looking.
The second worry is about the inbalnce of online and offline social network. At the article the author says that the social network makes us feel more comfortable and less stress and less cardiovascular desease no matter how far the friends but matter with how many friends. However, the online network link is very narrow, weak, it can be dislinked very easily. Even the online network is similar as the offline "real" network, it cannot replace the real network. Because of that we feel as same as online or offline, we should balance with those two network.
In conclusion, we should notice the dangerous using of neuroloical expeirment result and be balacned with on-line and off-line social network. If we use on-line social network wisely, with off-line social network, our life will be more happy, more with oxytosin, less stress. Thank you.
문제점. Transition을 쓰지 않았고, 단어가 어색한 것이 많았으며, 관점이 두개가 섞여버렸다.
다음 차례에는 관점을 하나로 맞추거나 아니면 두개로 확실히 나눈다. 그리고 단어를 찾아가며 정확한 단어를 쓴다.
Before I begin, let me ask two questions to you.
How many you guys do social network?
How many do you have twitter? How about blog? Then how about cyworld?
Yes, most of you have social network.
Then how many do you guys fall in love with somebody?
Nobody? It's tragedy.
The subject of my presentation is about the relation between twitter and feeling love, genersity.
The neuroeconomist Zak is the doctor of oxytosin. He research about the influence of oxytosin when we are doing something or when we feel something.
There are great correlation with oxytosin and our generosity.
When the person is inhaled by the oxytosin, he or she become more generous so they want to donate more money than others.
And if we feel sympathy, compassion or somekind of love, the oxytosin is growing on us.
Dr. Zak has done experiment with the person who is doing twitter with somebody, and we measure the amount of oxytosin in his body. The experimentee tweet with others with the normal conversation with some humor and jokes. The result of that experiment is that the oxytosin is increased in his body. The amount of increasing is similar with that of the mother who is in the wedding march of daughter. It shows that we have experienced tweeter as if it is real relationship in the world.
The social network at the online makes us feel more generous and more sympathy and more feeling love with somebody. With this oxytosin our streess is being lessen.
The online social network make our life more lubricant, doesn't it?
However, I have two concern about this phenomenon.
The first one is about the dangerous of control of us by using oxytosin or online social network in our shopping.
The second one is the illusion of social networking in online, or the collapse of social network in online.
The article also indicate the dangerous of the using of oxytosin as perchasing more.
We always notice about this with social looking.
The second worry is about the inbalnce of online and offline social network. At the article the author says that the social network makes us feel more comfortable and less stress and less cardiovascular desease no matter how far the friends but matter with how many friends. However, the online network link is very narrow, weak, it can be dislinked very easily. Even the online network is similar as the offline "real" network, it cannot replace the real network. Because of that we feel as same as online or offline, we should balance with those two network.
In conclusion, we should notice the dangerous using of neuroloical expeirment result and be balacned with on-line and off-line social network. If we use on-line social network wisely, with off-line social network, our life will be more happy, more with oxytosin, less stress. Thank you.
문제점. Transition을 쓰지 않았고, 단어가 어색한 것이 많았으며, 관점이 두개가 섞여버렸다.
다음 차례에는 관점을 하나로 맞추거나 아니면 두개로 확실히 나눈다. 그리고 단어를 찾아가며 정확한 단어를 쓴다.